Synopsis:

These two movies turn Star Trek Picard into two classic style Trek Movies with a 3 act structure and many hundered of changes, scoring tweaks, and much much more.

Intentions:

To tighten up plotting, improve characters and redeem the whole thing by giving a better flow, pacing and subtle score enhancements. Excessive fan-service was removed, new establishing shots and sequences created and a significant re-ordering of the sequences overall.

Change List:

CUTS FIRST, Then all other changes WHICH IS SPOLIER HEAVY. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!!!!!! CUTS 2 Movies 2h 30ish min each 2.5 hours removed (YUP!) 900+ changes Subtle score enhancements Characters Improved (all of them) Dead ends removed New sequences New opening New ending NO MAGIC "fix anything" DEVICE Believable villains (no cartoon like) No Silly French Accent F bombs (2 left) New establishing shots In the style of Classic Movies Data fixed re-sequencing 3 act structure to both films Needless exposition removed and much, much more. CHANGES SPOILERS FOLLOW SPOLIERS BELOW OK, DONT SAY YOU WERE NOT WARNED: STAR TREK PICARD Part 1: ECHOES of LAMENT Run Time 2Hrs 28min 00 Sec 001 - FANEDIT LOGO with added Ambient Space rumble AND A PAN, ZOOM AND CROP 004 – Crossfade to AIA, Planet of Grief flashback from Ep 8 opening 006 - Custom captions first revealing it is 2350, then AIA, THE GRIEF PLANET with a custom minor zoom and pan on the planet to better center the reveal and the caption alignment.

Additional Notes:

Many scenes were completely rebuilt, entire plot threads removed, dramatic pacing reordered, no silly magic device and 2 Movies 2h 30ish min each 2.5 hours removed (YUP!) 900+ changes Subtle score enhancements Characters Improved (all of them) Dead ends removed New sequences New opening New ending NO MAGIC "fix anything" DEVICE Believable villains (no cartoon like) No Silly French Accent F bombs (2 left) New establishing shots In the style of Classic Movies Data fixed re-sequencing 3 act structure to both films Needless exposition removed and much, much more.

Other Sources:

Star Trek: First Contact Star Trek TNG: Best of Both Worlds Star Trek 2009 Star Trek Nemesis Star Trek Voyager CDs Star Trek The Motion Picture 2 CD set Star Trek: First Contact Star Trek TNG: Best of Both Worlds Star Trek 2009 Star Trek Nemesis Star Trek.

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